Thursday, October 4, 2012

1.  C/C practice...Discussion/Explanation...   Where does this paragraph fit into an essay?

With a partner, please complete a paragraph using the format below:

1.  Topic Sentence
2.  Fact
3.  Opinion
4.  O
5.  F
6.  O
7.  O
8.  Concluding Sentence

Here is an example paragraph:

TS-  MCD offers poor service.
F-    For example, when one approaches the counter at MCD, most of the time, the employees don't even smile.
O-   This means that they are not happy to be there.
O-   This also mean they aren't happy to have customers.
F-    In addition, at the drive through, the order is often wrong.
O-   This means that the employees are careless.
O-   This means they don't care about the guests experience.
CS-  MCD's employees are not happy and they are careless so the service is poor.


Here is the topic sentence I'd like you to use to finish your paragraph-

TS:  College students are expected to behave in certain ways.


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