1.  Journal:

Read your own paper out loud with a pencil.  What did you notice?  Why?

2.  MLA Check groups...



3.   No Way Mistakes:

a.  Tense shift.  I love to eat when I was hungry.

b.  PNA-    Someone who is cool has all the tricks; they know how to...

c.  VTA-  I loves to eat.

d.  Comma Splice: (CS) I love to eat, I love to cook.

e.  Run on:  I love to eat I love to cook.

f.  Parallelism:  I love to ride my bike, walk the dog, and watching movies


4.  HW-  Fix essays to submit on Wed.

5.  HW-  Read pages 1-21 in On Course and complete the self-assessment.

6.  HW-  During reading, prepare 3 questions for the class, and make a list of the 5 most important points.