Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Paragraph format

1.  Peer Mentor, Victoria, presentation.

2.  Journals-, essay checks-  :  Besides the positive traits you've mentioned in your peer affirmation, name 2 more and summarize why they are good traits about you.

3.  HW check

4.  Groups and reading.

5.  HW-  Completing the next BP in the self-affirmation/descriptive essay.

NOTES:



Paragraph Format-

TS: opinion.
F:   For Example
O:  This shows that
O:   This also shows that
F:  In addition
O:  This shows that
O:  This also shows that.
F:  What’s more
O:  This shows that
O:  This shows that
CS:  Restatement of TS










TS:  Soccer is the greatest sport in the world.
F:  For example, soccer is the most popular sport in the world;  more people watch the world cup final than any other sporting event every year.
O:  This shows that most people enjoy watching soccer, and that must mean it is the best sport around.
O: Soccer, then, is the most popular sport in the world so that makes it the most awesome sport.
F: In addition, soccer players are more fit than any other team sport athletes on the planet.
O:  This shows that it is very difficult to play soccer.
O:  This also shows that only a select few athletes can play it because of how hard it is;  this adds to its greatness.
F:  What’s more, they have no set plays like in other sports.
O:  This shows they have to be very intelligent.
O:  This also shows that they have to make decisions very fast and be accurate or it hurts the team so soccer is a hard sport to play and takes a ton of intelligence.
CS: Since soccer is the most popular and the most difficult physically and mentally, it is the greatest sport in the world.











 

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